For the project my class is working on in AP English Literature, we were recommended to select a book to read from the library's extensive Young Adult fiction case. I had been eyeing one of the books shown to us (Going Bovine) because it looked kind of strange, and the librarian that showed us the book assured us that it was an exemplary, award winning example of Young Adult literature. Full of hopeful excitement, I picked up the book and began to read.
One of my teachers from a long time ago had a saying about reading. She said that reading a good book was like diving into a nice, cool pool of sparkling water on a warm sunny day. Was reading Going Bovine like diving into a nice, cool pool of sparkling water on a warm sunny day? Not exactly. Was it like diving into a decent, lukewarm algae-filled lake on a miserable, windy day? Almost. The image that entered my head as I read this book was that the experience was more like diving into a boiling pool of cow mucus as the flames and storms of Armageddon split the sky above me, showering me with large chunks of flaming debris. Okay, maybe it wasn't quite that bad, but it wasn't a nice, cool pool of sparkling water by any stretch of the imagination.
The book focuses around an angsty, drug-addicted teenager named Cameron Smith. The book introduces him as he narrates going to Disneyworld and thinking something that included the abbreviation WTF. WTF, coincidentally, was the first thought going through my head as I read the passage. Why was there chatspeak in an award winning work of literature? Was the author merely against swearing in their books? (Incorrect; Cameron Smith swears like a sailor in a storm.) Was the author providing some sort of commentary on teenaged online culture? (If the author was, it was extremely unclear and never mentioned again.) Was the author trying to relate to teenagers? The answer seemed to me to sadly be yes. And as I continued to read the book, I realized that my hands were slightly more tightly clenched, and my eyes slightly narrowed. The author, in trying to relate to teenagers, was merely insulting them at every scene in the book. I, in the course of reading this book, was literally being insulted by it.
The other classmates of Cameron Smith are all presented as drug dealing, cursing, high school failures. I'd like to say that the author was merely trying to show how some people in the school were acting, but the author takes specific measures to make sure that every single person in the school is lumped under that all consuming blanket. Is this the audience of Young Adult literature? Was this what teachers, politicians, and writers endorsing to try to get students more interested in reading? A book that does its best to constantly insult both their intelligence and who they are as people? I'd like to think that the author was merely not writing well enough to portray them as more than just wooden caricatures of every educator's nightmare, but as the author has won an award for her work, I realized that I had to believe that she meant to do this, or that she simply was not a good enough writer to realize that she was doing it. Either way, I found that I was disgusted.
I continued to read over one hundred pages of the book. From Cameron Smith's typical bad relationship with his family to the job he works at, and what happens at his job that shows nothing about his character and little for actual plot development, to when he discovers that he is dying, to when he meets Gonzo and they set off to New Orleans... maybe the book gets better. Maybe the book becomes a truly award winning source of material, that deserves a place among literary giants of the world. Even if it did, that would not be acceptable. A good book, and a competent writer, do not need over one hundred pages to properly set up and begin a story. In fact, an incredible writer can tell an exceptional story in less than twenty words. (For an example of this, I would suggest reading Stephen King's The Jaunt, or Hemmingway's Hills like White Elephants.)The author of Going Bovine barely starts the story in one hundred pages, taking (over, actually) five times as long to do half of what Hemmingway and King accomplish.
I returned the book to its shelf after far too long a time spent reading it. As I put it back, I considered another piece of Young Adult literature near it, Ender's Game. Like Going Bovine, the book has won considerable acclaim and awards for what it did. Unlike Going Bovine, it creates an exceptionally vivid and imaginative look at a horrifying idea of what the future might be, filled with psychological terror and action and actual characters that didn't behave like mere caricatures of very young children. It was an imaginative work of literature that still delights and inspires me to this day, ultimately succeeding without meaning to at what the author of Going Bovine meant to do but failed at; inspiring young students to continue reading and love literature.
To conclude this blog post/rant, Going Bovine is not a good example of Young Adult literature. In my opinion, it is not a good book and should not be an award winning look of literature, and especially should not be viewed by educators as a good way to get young adults to read.
Friday, May 28, 2010
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Ah Stereotyping, you know it seems like people are always talking about Black stereotypes, Latino stereotypes, Asian stereotypes, the list goes on and on, but bo one ever seems to care about Teenage Stereotypes. if I may quote Cameron Smith, WTF
ReplyDeleteWow--strong opinions, well stated! And I have to agree with David's comment.... what's up with teenage stereotypes? With so many types of people in the world (including teenagers), it seems rather lazy to fall back upon such boring characters....
ReplyDeletehahaha David, you should write for the maroon! :P
ReplyDeleteI don't think it is just literature that demeans and sets lower standards for teenagers today. I think there is a general lack of faith in our generation, how many times have you heard, "kids these days...."
aughg, I hate hearing that.
Anyways, you should read, "The Absolutely True Diary of a Part-Time Indian" by Sherman Alexie. (It is availible at NPHS library, but I don't think we're allowed to sign out anymore books at this time in the year, definitely worth checking out though)
Now THAT is a book that accurately portrays the struggles of youth. It includes, and makes a mockery of modern day stereotypes of native americans and their struggles with white culture and reservation life. It is a hilarious easy read. It's set in modern day spokane. (It's not some ancient hard-to-relate discrimination from 50 years ago, it's today.)
I see what you mean about throwing everyone into one group and that certainly seems to be a problem in some well-liked literature. Although I will point out that I have heard people in real life say the letters "W-T-F" at certain occasions. That said, if the author did not have a problem with having the character swear through the rest of the book this seems rather clumsy. The second thing (or third that lumps back into the first) I want add is that it seems a lot "award winning" and "critically acclaimed" books look into a very pessimistic scenario of teenage life. Do you think adult are just trying to connect with the worst of the teen years or do you think they really see all teens as part of that stereotype?
ReplyDeleteDavid: I'd call it the new most-loved form of discrimination, but as bad as it is, I don't think it's quite that bad yet, haha.
ReplyDeleteMrs. Diana: I don't know, but I just hope that these stereotypes aren't what people honestly believe is true about teenagers...
Sam: I think the problem has existed before our generation; otherwise "Catcher in The Rye" never could have been written. Arguably that would be a good thing, but I'm going to try not to touch that subject. I have been thinking about reading The Absolutely True Diary of a Part-Time Indian, but it was introduced to me alongside Going Bovine, and I'm afraid they'll be too similar for my liking.
And yes, I would love to write for the Maroon someday. :)
Sara: People may say it in real life, but does it make for good writing, or a good introduction to a character? People say a lot of things, the secret to good communication and writing is knowing what to say and when; I refuse to give Going Bovine a pass on that. And yes, I would agree that writers focus on more pessimistic teenage life, but there's a different from say, the teenagers of "The Long Walk" and "Going Bovine", even if both books focus on the negative aspects of teenagers.